31 Flavours, Day Twenty One, Villanelle winner is Sharon
Villanelle A Villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of a very specific rhyming scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa. The first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating...
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Hanging on my chain are shapes that reflect me, holding love and pain. memories to cherish again, dangling free, hanging on my chain. figures small and plain, they are the heart of me, holding love...
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Building DreamsIt takes time to build dreams,Weave yours into mine Sewn together with moonbeamsLay with me by the streamLet our fingers intertwine,It takes time to build dreamsWhisper as the water...
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Nice work Jan :) sewn together with moonbeams, that is so sweet.
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hiking we go, you and mewe certainly love a nice long walkand the national park has much to seetheres ancient prehistoric beech treesman, if only they could talkhiking we go, you and mejust think,...
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Death Darkness surrounds my stone, as I lay silently at rest. No more can you hear my groan. Nothing now but dust and bone, emptiness in my chest. Darkness surrounds my stone. I lay here all alone,...
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Therese, a great piece, makes me want to go out walking today. Nicely done! Philip, top notch, I enjoyed the flow, so very well put together. Man I seem to say the same things over and over again, but...
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Therese, a great piece, makes me want to go out walking today. Nicely done! Philip, top notch, I enjoyed the flow, so very well put together. Man I seem to say the same things over and over again, but...
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Finding Goodbye (Villanelle) I found your message in the bottle, at the bottom of a dried up seathere was but one word written, it was goodbye, something I never heard from you,so is this some kind...
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~You Take My Breath Away ~You my love take my breath awayyou quell my passions desirefrom your side I will never strayYou put happiness in my dayyour kisses set me on fireyou my love take my breath...
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Deep today Bri, now grab that bottle and bury it. Good form. Alana, nice structure, it's always nice to have your breath taken away.
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How quickly we forgetthe scars of youthful blunderings.The pangs of past regretsmay leave us in a cold sweatyet with time we're left wonderinghow quickly we forget.A soul is left in debtwhile it's...
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For economy of form, and fluidity of the refrain, my pick today is: Sharon!
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Congrats Sharon!!! I actually used your beautiful piece to work off ~smile~
View ArticleRe: 31 Flavours, Day Twenty One, Villanelle winner is Sharon
Congrats Sharon!!! I actually used your beautiful piece to work off ~smile~
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Sharon I'm not surprised. Congratulations.
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I liked yours too Bruce. Good refrain! Thanks Bri and Philip :) Glad I could assist Bri.
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